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हर्फ़ अधूरे है , पैगाम मुकम्मल है ?????????????

जहा सोच की परिक्वता को न देखा जाये ,
पहनावा ही व्यक्तित्व का आईना कहलाये ,
अन्यथा
अस्तित्व को ही नकारा जाये  !
वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा ..........


    जहा कर्मछेत्र में पहला हो भ्रस्ठाचार ,
     रिश्तो में फैली हो कड़वाहट  ,
     इन्सान बना हो रक्षक से भक्षक ,
     आत्मा की आवाज को न सुना जाये जहा  ,
     वहा बसता नहीं भारत मेरा .........


जहा शमशानों में बसता हो जीवन  ,
बर्बरता की हद  से ज्यादा ,
फैली  हो वहशियत जहाँ में  ,
इंसानियत का होता हो खून हर रोज जहा ,
वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा ............


     जहा जज्बातों की कदर न हो ,
     व्यवहारिक जीवन सब जीते हो ,
     ऊंच - नीच  का भेद ही करके ,
     इंसानों को बाटा जाये जहा ,
     वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा ............


जहा काला - धंधा सरेआम होता रहे , 
न्याय का फंदा हररोज झूलता रहे फासी  पर ,
झूठ बैठा  हो शहनशाह  बनकर महलों में ,
सच्चाई बैठी हो ठुकराने पर झोपडी में ,
वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा .............


      जहा गरु को चाहना हो गरु - दक्षिणा की ,
      शिष्य को न शिक्षा मिलती हो ,
      भूखे को न भोजन मिलता हो ,
      गरीब को न वस्त्र मिलता हो ,
      वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा .............


विश्व में फेला कर चेतना सवं चेतनाहीन हो गया है ,
अहिंषा का पुजारी हिंसात्मक  हो गया है ,
पापाचार की गहराई मापी न जाती हो जहा ,
वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा .............


       जहा रिश्तो में गर्माहट न हो ,
       अपनत्व ही बोझ  बना हो ,
       जो अपनी ही पहचान की खोज में ,
       चलता हो पीछे दुनिया के ,
       वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा .............
       वह बसता नहीं भारत मेरा .............

 Top Comment : Nitin M Aras   | 05 14 2009 06:33:08 +0000
VERY AWAKENING.... DON'T STOP WRITING.... YOUR EFFORTS ARE UNACCOUNTABLE... DEFINITELY ONE DAY YOU WILL SUCCEED IN... GREAT SOCIAL WORK.... APPRECIATED..... MANJU..... JAGTE RAHO - JAGATE RAHO.... THANKS
 
13 comments on "A Complete message for everyone......हर्फ़ अधूरे है , पैगाम मुकम्मल है ?????????????"
  Commented by  Manish Grover, Sales Executive/Officer, Pugmarks Interweb Pvt Ltd.    | 12 02 2009 10:07:49 +0000
Thats Patriotic !
  Commented by  Nitin M Aras, Head/VP/GM-Tech. Support, Wintech Taparia Limited    | 05 14 2009 06:33:08 +0000
Rating : +1 
VERY AWAKENING.... DON'T STOP WRITING.... YOUR EFFORTS ARE UNACCOUNTABLE... DEFINITELY ONE DAY YOU WILL SUCCEED IN... GREAT SOCIAL WORK.... APPRECIATED..... MANJU..... JAGTE RAHO - JAGATE RAHO.... THANKS
  Commented by  manish dave, Correspondent, Etv Rajasthan    | 05 14 2009 06:09:40 +0000
one of the best poem about Bharat i ever read....thanks
  Commented by  Sanjay Sharma, Service/Maintenance Engineer FLSmidth India Pvt. Ltd    | 05 04 2009 17:27:10 +0000
i dont know whether we have taken birth in ur india or not.
Even not sure whether we can see your india or not... in this life time
Courtesy we the people of india...

Most of the countryman are not human being, they are money making machines without heart and senses...
  Commented by  Karuna, Analyst    | 05 04 2009 17:22:10 +0000
awesome dude, hats off to you for sharing this bitter truth for our own India.
  Commented by  Rajan Agarwal, Program Manager, Ebix    | 04 30 2009 11:48:21 +0000
Good one,
  Commented by  sachin, FINANCE ANALYST    | 04 29 2009 10:31:11 +0000
ufffffffff...manju ji...briliantily...briliant...this touch my heart 
great thought manju ji. Excellent imagination. Superb wording. Honest feeling. As an Indian i wish that your each and every word comes true. Request to all that refer this article to every body.
  Commented by  varsha ., technical manager(QMS), frac    | 04 27 2009 08:45:28 +0000
very influential  word....
thanks a tonne manju jee
Good one, and at the right time!! Why not make it public in all the print and electronic media? you can do it Manju.
  Commented by  UDAY PRATAP SINGH, Asst. Director/Director, UDMITA FILMS    | 04 27 2009 05:00:15 +0000
Hi manju...very excitinggggggggggg............!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
  Commented by  Rajesh Thakkar, BDM, INfo    | 04 27 2009 04:08:54 +0000
Excellent! Simply Superb!
  Commented by  BEENA AGARWAL, Head/VP/GM-Corporate Planning/Strategy, ANADI HI TECH AGRO PVT LTD    | 04 27 2009 03:11:50 +0000
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Hey Patriot Madam nice painful poem with all truths.Its real picture of our Nation INDIA Today. 
Even after so much higher education people and politicians are just exploiting the country for their own benefit as your words are telling every step of truth.
Now we have to find the way out for the awareness as we are literate and our brain works.We can die for our country and for the innocent people who dont have idea for good or bad.They just need their today food thats all.So, people exploit them
How we can save our Nation ??????????????? How ? Can any one give the solution!!!!!!!!
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