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आज कुछ लिखने का मन किया ,


फिर सोचा क्यों न  इक कहानी लिखा दू  !


ऐसी  इक रवानी देखू  ,


जिसकी कोई कहानी बना दू !


फिर सोचा क्यों न बचपन को जी लू ,


शब्दों में मै उस को ढालू ,


संग -संग अपने तुमको ले लू ,


ऐसी  इक रवानी देखू  ,


जिसकी कोई कहानी बना दू !


जब से घर का आंगन छोटा हो गया  !


बचपन उस से दूर हो गया ,


भोलापन अब छिप गया कुछ ऐसे ,


जैसे छिपता है चाँद  गगन में  !  


उसके पीछे दोड़ लगाई मैंने काफी ,


उसको वापिस लाने की !


पर अफ़सोस गया वक्त कहा आता है फिर से ,


बचपन की वो हल्हड़ मस्ती ,


दिन भी अपना ,शाम भी अपनी ,


अब तो हर पल जाने कैसे ,


उड़ता है यू पंख लगा के  ,


जैसे उड़ता है कोई पंछी ,


इस उन्मुक्त गगन मे,

 
ऐसी  इक रवानी देखू  ,


जिसकी कोई कहानी बना दू !

 

 Top Comment : Rajani Sharma   | 06 15 2009 12:42:00 +0000
Hmmmm Bahut acche...jab bhi mein bacchon ko dekhati hoon to apna bachpan yaad a jata hai...kitna maza tha tab...saaara saara din khelte they aur fir bhi thakthe nahi they...woh bachpan kyun zindagi mein ek baar hi ata hai...par apki is kavita ne to fir se bachpan ke din samne la diye...good
 
14 comments on "बचपन उस से दूर हो गया ...alone childhood ...."
  Commented by  pradip dagra, computer operator & Accountant,    | 07 11 2009 10:56:32 +0000
i missing my bachpan.nice thouht.
  Commented by  Makrand Bhave, Sales Promotion Manager, XYZ    | 06 19 2009 04:29:43 +0000
Super! It also reminds me of another song... Bachpan ke din Bhula na dena... Aaj hanse kal rula na dena....!! Thans for the referral Manju.. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
  Commented by  B.Mehernath, Sales/BD Manager, Belroc Costruction chemicals India(P) Ltd.    | 06 18 2009 13:41:42 +0000
Thanx Manju, now there is only one way left, look at the kids and remember those days which are gone, still we can enjoy few moments by playing with them forgetting our age and status.
  Commented by  Nitin M Aras, Head/VP/GM-Tech. Support, Wintech Taparia Limited    | 06 17 2009 08:31:49 +0000
Rating : +1 
Sweet memorable days of childhood. Good
  Commented by  sachin, FINANCE ANALYST    | 06 17 2009 05:12:40 +0000
one more ""mile stone" Manu...sweet to think again and recalling the memories of childhood...but really time doesn't stop...
  Commented by  Ahmed Sultan, ITC, Senior Tourism Consultant, UltraConsultants    | 06 16 2009 18:55:26 +0000
Rating : +4 
What is the idea of referring a NON-English article to me?
  Commented by  Uday Shankar Mishra, Dy. Manager(C&S)    | 06 16 2009 09:18:26 +0000
Manju jee, your way of thinking and the ablity to convert it in to sweet poems is very good. This poem is also very nice and reminds us our childhood when there was no tension only happiness. 
  Commented by  sachin, FINANCE ANALYST    | 06 16 2009 05:03:59 +0000
Bachpan as always is the best...that truthfulness, innocence good one Manju... 
  Commented by  Dr. Navin Kumar, Assistant Manager /Analyst, Krishi Gram Vikash Kendra    | 06 16 2009 01:27:13 +0000
thanks manju jee , ye bahut marmik kabita he 
  Commented by  varsha, technical manager(QMS)    | 06 15 2009 15:17:29 +0000
Rating : +1 
let me share very nice song sung by Mukesh jee...

"AAya hain mujhe fir wo yaad gujara jamana bachpan ka 
hai re akele chodh ke jaana aur na aana bachpan ka"

sharing the same feeling as above..
thanks manju jee
  Commented by  BEENA AGARWAL, Head/VP/GM-Corporate Planning/Strategy, ANADI HI TECH AGRO PVT LTD    | 06 15 2009 12:44:52 +0000
Bachpan ki yaad aa gai Manju,its really nice thought.keep on writing.........
  Commented by  Rajani Sharma, SAP Collabera    | 06 15 2009 12:42:00 +0000
Rating : +1 
Hmmmm Bahut acche...jab bhi mein bacchon ko dekhati hoon to apna bachpan yaad a jata hai...kitna maza tha tab...saaara saara din khelte they aur fir bhi thakthe nahi they...woh bachpan kyun zindagi mein ek baar hi ata hai...par apki is kavita ne to fir se bachpan ke din samne la diye...good
  Commented by  vishab veer singh rana, Relationship Executive, policybazaar.com    | 06 15 2009 12:20:54 +0000
really aaj bachpan yaad aa gya ....thanks for sweet poem .....keep ur work moving
  Commented by  sujit, PGP Student, Batch of 2010, IIM Kozhikode    | 06 15 2009 11:31:29 +0000
Rating : +1 
ye theek hai
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