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याद है मुझे
तुम डाँटकर, डराकर सिखाते थे मुझे तैरना
और मैं डरता था पानी से
मैं सोचता...बाबूजी पत्थर हैं!
इसी पानी में तुम्हारी अस्थियाँ बहाईं
तब समझा हूँ...
तैरना ज़रूरी है इस दुनिया में!
बाबा...मैं तैर नहीं पाता
आ जाओ वापस सिखा दो मुझे तैरना
वरना दुनिया डुबो देगी मुझे!

बाबा..अब समझा हूँ मैं
थाली में जूठा छोड़ने पर नाराज़गी,
पेंसिल गुमने पर फटकार,
और इम्तहान के वक़्त केबल निकलवाने का मतलब!
कुढ़ता था मैं.....बाबूजी गंदे हैं!
मेरी खुशी बर्दाश्त नहीं इनको
अब समझा हूँ तुम्हें जब नहीं हो तुम!

तुम दोस्त नहीं थे मेरे माँ की तरह..
पर समझते थे वो सब जो माँ नहीं समझती
देर रात.. दबे पाँव आता था मैं
अपने बिस्तर पर पड़े छुपकर मुस्कुरा देते थे तुम
तुमसे डरता था मैं!
बाबा...तुम्हारा नाम लेकर अब नहीं डराती माँ नहीं कहती बाबूजी से बोलूँगी...
बस एक टाइम खाना खाती है!

बाबा....याद है मुझे
जब सिर में टाँकें आए थे
तुम्हारी हड़बड़ाहट....पुचकार रहे थे तुम मुझे
तब मैंने माँ देखी थी तुममें!
विश्वास हुआ था मुझे माँ की बात पर..
बाबूजी बहुत चाहते हैं तुझे
आकर चूमते हैं तेरा माथा जब सो जाता है तू!
बाबा..
तुम कहानी क्यों नहीं सुनाते थे?
मैं रोता माँ के पास सोने को
और तुम करवट लेकर
ज़ोर से आँखें बंद कर लेते!
तुम्हारी चिता को आग दी
तबसे बदली-सी लगती है दुनिया
बाबा..
तुमने हाथ कभी नहीं फेरा
अब समझा हूँ तुम्हारा हाथ हमेशा था
मेरे सिर पर!
कल रात माँ रो पड़ी उधेड़ती चली गई .
तुम्हारे प्रेम की गुदड़ी यादों की रूई निकाली
फिर धुनककर सिल दी वापस!

बाबा..
तुम्हारा गुनहगार हूँ मैं नहीं समझा तुम्हें..
तुमने भी तो नहीं बताया
कैसे भरी थी मेरी फीस!
देखो.....दादी के पुराने कंगन छुड़वा लिए हैं मैंने
जिन्हें गिरवी रखा था तुमने..
मेरे लिए!
बाबा.. मैं रोता था अक्सर
यह सोचकर....बाबूजी गले नहीं लगाते मुझे
अब समझा हूँ सिर्फ़ जतलाने से प्यार नहीं होता!
बाबा.. आ जाओ वापस
तुमसे लिपटकरजी भर के रोना है मुझे एक बार
बाबा...अब समझा हूँ तुम्हें जब नहीं हो तुम!!
 

 Top Comment : manju dagar   | 02 25 2009 11:24:01 +0000
Its tooooooooooo gooddddddddddddd . Really very touching ..My feeling about my parents same like this... Thanks Abhishek Sir. With regards Manju Dagar
 
35 comments on "पापा अब समझा हूँ तुम्हे जब नहीं हो तुम "
  Commented by  Rajeev Sharma, executive, Torrent Pharma    | 11 13 2011 06:19:00 +0000
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nice
  Commented by  Mukta Bahl, Service Coordinator, The Millennium Group    | 11 12 2011 17:54:32 +0000
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its reality. people once gone never come back but their words echo in our ears . Parents always think of their children's well being but say it childhood, that is unable to comprehend those emotions and by the time one is old enough to understand , there is no one to say or advise. Abhishek ji, you have touched every heart with this poem. 
regards
  Commented by  sunil kumar sharma, M.Sc student, aptech    | 02 07 2011 10:51:07 +0000
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such a nice poem...very loveing & touching
krizma_06542@rediffmail.com
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fantastic poem..fortunately my father is with me..thanks to god..blessings to all who lost their father..god bless them.
  Commented by  mahesh mani tripathi, MCA student, uptu,lucknow    | 01 17 2011 20:00:25 +0000
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I remember you Daँtkaar, Derackar taught me to swim and I was afraid of water ... I think Papa stone! This will explain the water Bhaean your bones ... Swimming is important in the world! Baba ... I can not swim back to come teach me to swim or else the world will drown me! Baba .. I see I leave refuse plate resentment, pencil on Guamane reprimand, and test means of the time cable flush! I was Kudht papa ..... dirty! I am happy now considered not afford them when you're not! You were not friends like my mother .. Understood at all that the mother does not understand the late night .. Do leg was buried lying on my bed smiling secretly gave you I was afraid of you! Baba ... do not scare you by name now 
  Commented by  ALOK SHUKLA, Area Manager, Manipal K-12 Pvt. Ltd.    | 01 17 2011 17:22:52 +0000
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Thanks a lot @ Abhishek Sir
  Commented by  Pawan Bahuguna, B.Tech student, College of Engineering    | 01 17 2011 16:30:59 +0000
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Great Man..
  Commented by  Deepak Kumar Mahla, Automation Enginner, CRPL    | 01 17 2011 15:46:26 +0000
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what a great n thoughtful poem .... tears run down my eyes while reading this .... heart touching poem ..... 
  Commented by  Nishu Kaushish, M.Sc student, Kurukshetra University    | 11 23 2010 09:04:32 +0000
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hi abhishek
its really a beautiful poem ...........awesome
 
  Commented by  Harish Sharma, Asstt. Manager HR, kangaro industries ltd    | 11 16 2010 10:47:56 +0000
really a very good poem.
  Commented by  Sanju Basantani, B.Com student, Gujarat University    | 11 14 2010 08:58:06 +0000
Too Good Sir !! 
It Got Tears in My Eyes..
Really We boys Never understand our Dad , Until We Become dad..
  Commented by  Omkar Kulkarni, Accounts Officer, Minilec(India) Pvt Ltd    | 11 02 2010 15:56:56 +0000
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Really touching
  Commented by  Nitin M Aras, XYZ    | 11 02 2010 10:57:23 +0000
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Ritesh,... thanks to you to live this posting again.....one of the best posting ever recd in this forum.... Abhishek is realy great...
  Commented by  Ritesh Mishra, Sales & application Engineer, Sunshine tech Pvt. ltd    | 11 02 2010 10:47:39 +0000
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Thanks Abhishak Aapne mughe mere baba ki yad dila de jinse mai unk last time mil nahi paya kyoki unka dehant jis din huaa us din mere engineering ka exam tha .....mughse exam b teek se diya nahi gya tha .....Thanks bro....
With Warm regards
Ritesh Mishra
  Commented by  Priti Tiwari, AM Engineer, Nokia Siemens Network    | 10 30 2010 13:51:51 +0000
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such a nice poem...very touching
  Commented by  BEENA AGARWAL, Head/VP/GM-Corporate Planning/Strategy, ANADI HI TECH AGRO PVT LTD    | 06 04 2009 13:57:47 +0000
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Hi Abhishek,
Its really really tooo much heart touching,I was reciting to my son but could not finish as I really started crying!!!!!
Its awsome Abhi...Really you got extreme deep feelings and emotions tooo
no word to say.... its tooooooooooooooooooo touching. Thanx for sharing.
  Commented by  yogendra singh chauhan, QA&QC-Executive D & Sawoe    | 06 04 2009 08:33:03 +0000
JUST.........REAL........
  Commented by  cyclone, Network Admin/System Admin, mstrix    | 03 23 2009 05:46:18 +0000
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its soul-touching
  Commented by  JAPI, HR Manager, ACME Consultants    | 03 07 2009 19:12:49 +0000
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amazing.......thanks for sharing...
  Commented by  Vivek Singh, Construction Manager L&T    | 03 07 2009 07:12:51 +0000
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I related this to me both as son and father....bhai rula diya aapkee kavita ne...literally. How you typed in Hindi please help me.
  Commented by  varsha ., Technical manger(QMS)    | 03 03 2009 13:53:29 +0000
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thanks abhishek for making me realize the real love of father ...........very touchingggg.....
  Commented by  Devi Kaladeen, Audit Manager, Health Sector Development Unit    | 02 28 2009 18:36:20 +0000
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I cannot read hindi...so I had to ask someone to intrepret this poem for me. It is very touching. I also lost my father on 26.06.07...on the day of my sister's birthday.My father was my best cricket friend...I learn so much from him.I miss him so much...may his soul rest in pesce. 
  Commented by  UDAY SHANKAR MISHRA, Dy. Mgr.(Computer Services)    | 02 28 2009 11:55:10 +0000
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Yes, It is true that we recognise our father only when we lost him. My father died on 06.01.2008 and after reading this poem my eyes are full of tears. Thanks a lot for such a nice poem.
  Commented by  Hitesh Giri, Recruitment Executive, JAV Consultancy Services    | 02 28 2009 08:40:25 +0000
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touch to my heart.. too good
  Commented by  shweta, Financial Analyst, nirdhan niketan ashram    | 02 27 2009 10:25:05 +0000
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its soul-touching.........
its like watever we feel,  & we r nt able to express it in words , & resides in our emotions , heart.........
really mindblowing, my goodwishes r  for u
i loves my papa more than anything, any1..........
  Commented by  Dilip Singh Rathore, Construction-General Building, Deep Associates    | 02 27 2009 07:39:30 +0000
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very good ...
  Commented by  Dilip Singh Rathore, Construction-General Building, Deep Associates    | 02 27 2009 07:37:56 +0000
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Dil ko chhoo lene wali poetry hai. es se achha papa ki feelings ko samjhne ke liye kuchh aur nahi ho sakta.
  Commented by  Mohd Asghar Naqvi, Recruitment Manager, Brook Software System Pvt. Ltd.    | 02 27 2009 07:08:27 +0000
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Very nice poem.....Dear
  Commented by  Girish Nair, HR & BD Executive, I-Link Software Pvt. Ltd.    | 02 27 2009 04:03:25 +0000
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Beautiful poem...Very touching....U have beautifully described about how almost all Fathers are for their children....This poem touched so much...that I immediately called up my father and had a good 18 mins chat with him....
Thanks Abhi....for sharing...

Regards,
Girish
  Commented by  Nitin M Aras, Head/VP/GM-Tech. Support, Wintech Taparia Limited    | 02 26 2009 12:51:15 +0000
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Abhishek,

U r Fantastic. I don't know how do I rate you, because I don't know how to write a poem. But if something you r writing and understand by others means u have communicated your feelings. It is really good, very touching and full of emotions. I love my parents too, specially my papa.

Please continue writing.

Best regards.

Nitin
  Commented by  Imanpreet $ingh, Student, Kathuria Group of Information Tech.    | 02 25 2009 13:08:41 +0000
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hmm...touchin aoul...
  Commented by  Arti Arora, Branch Manager/Regional Manager, NII    | 02 25 2009 11:52:03 +0000
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that's wonderful poem.. very toughing... but ya that's the fact. We do not understand why our parents behave strictly, because they want us to face the real life.. Thanks Abhishek.
  Commented by  manju dagar, News Anchor/TV Presenter, Time Today    | 02 25 2009 11:24:01 +0000
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Its tooooooooooo gooddddddddddddd .
Really very touching ..My feeling about my parents same like this...
Thanks Abhishek Sir.
With regards
Manju Dagar 
  Commented by  Bhumika .U.Tewari, Recruitment Executive Manpower Incorp.    | 02 25 2009 10:41:00 +0000
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touching, seems u a good poet..
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