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FEAR

by Ardhendu Pal on Friday, September 23, 2011 at 8:17pm

 

Alone in the dense forest

For a while, I rest

Admiring the nature, God’s the best

I did never ever know the hidden unrest.

 

To have me as it’s celebrated feast

I was chased by a fearsome beast

Unaware of approaching misfortune I ran towards east

In the due course of time, miniature seemed the fear of the beast.

 

Landed up to the Amazon River

Where waited those hungry alligator

Those seemed like a dangerous deadly predator

My soul, Oh! Trapped in my bodily crater.

 

Ill fate was all to take pride

Because a starving lion was waiting on the other side

I calculated that time approached for soul to take the bulls ride

Come on, I’m not going to commit suicide

 

Chased by the beast

Gazed by the alligator

Decided to head to the south

To be in more danger’s mouth.

 

Oh! What a kindest God’s mercy

I was wearing a green colored jersey

Then I saw a dense tree

For certain time, I felt free.

 

Where waited the starving chimpanzee

Hungry for many days and were not easy

A bait of my kind came to them for free

Seemed greatly that they will tear me in pieces a thousand and three

 

The very thought of chasing beast

Was developing, into my confidence, the yeast

Over the top those deadly chimpanzee

Were making me most uneasy.

 

My shoes were all worn and torn out

I was going to be fed, there is no doubt

Oh! Hail to all my training and workout

For five hours and half I gave the death a knockout.

 

There came a pious waterfall

To jump was my soul’s ultimate call

I won’t be eaten up, no, not at all

“Oh! God Thou Art Great”, I shout and I fall.

 

 Top Comment : Srinivas suravajhala   | 09 27 2011 06:03:17 +0000
Good dear Ardhendu. A small suggestion. Better if you cut the last four lines. They are not as apt as other lines. Im sorry if I am wrong.
 
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  Commented by  Srinivas suravajhala, Asst. Manager.    | 09 28 2011 11:26:06 +0000
Thank you Ardhendu for heeding to my suggestion and cut the last four lines.  You have the attitude of a successful personality.  All the very best. 
  Commented by  Ardhendu Pal, Upgrading Knowledge Base, Researching in Computer Software/Hardware    | 09 27 2011 13:38:18 +0000
Than you specially Mr. Srinivas because in my latest venture I really need suggestions and I know that here I'll get the best suggestions from better thinkers than myself.
  Commented by  Rathin Deb, Freelance Retail Consultant    | 09 27 2011 07:49:30 +0000
Ardhendu Good. Keep it up.
  Commented by  Srinivas suravajhala, Asst. Manager.    | 09 27 2011 06:03:17 +0000
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Good dear Ardhendu.  A small suggestion.   Better if you cut the last four lines. They are not as apt as other lines.   Im sorry if I am wrong. 
Good Ardhendu, Congrats on becoming a poet !!
  Commented by  Ardhendu Pal, Upgrading Knowledge Base, Researching in Computer Software/Hardware    | 09 26 2011 14:40:11 +0000
Disclaimer:- This is purely my intellectual property and no copying or reproduction will be tolerated anyhow.
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