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बहुत प्यार करते थे न मुझे ,
फिर क्यों चले गये... ?
मुझमे मेरे होने का अहसास कराया था तुमने ,
फिर खुद को मुझमे समाहित कर,
क्यों चले गये?कहा चले गये?
तुम्हारे बिना मेरी दुनिया क्या होगी,
इसका फैसला किये बिना तुम क्यों चले गये?
सबकुछ तो
वही है,बस तुम्हारी कमी खलती है ,
तुम्हारी ये राधा तुम्हे हर पल पूजा करती है.
कभी तो मिलोगे,कही तो मिलोगे,
एक बार छला मुझको ,पर अब न छलोगे.
कह दो एक बार की तुम मेरे लिए हो,
ये था तुम्हे एहसास ,इसलिए फिर से मिले हो.
अब जो मिले हो, तो ऐसे न जाने दूंगी,
वही पीड़ा,वही कसक खुद में समाने न दूंगी,
दूंगी तोहफा उसी अहसास का,
जो तुम बिन तिल-तिल कर जिया है मैंने,
रख के सीने पे तेरे शीश ,
मै खुद को मिट जाने दूंगी,
हा तेरे प्यार में मै खुद को सिमट जाने दूंगी.
-[25/12/2006] {2.45 am-} Nandini g

 Top Comment : Vivek Singh   | 04 24 2010 05:43:50 +0000
Achchi kavita hai. Aapne akavita se behatar chhand likha hai. Par don me bhasha par control nahi kiya. Hindi, urdu ke mix ke mukable kisi bhi ek bhasha shuddhta zyada achhi lagti hai kavita me.
 
7 comments on "बहुत प्यार करते थे न मुझे..."
  Commented by  Abhishek Tiwari, Team Lead | Web Servers | Network    | 05 23 2011 08:12:13 +0000
bahut achii hai...Nandini g...You love him ALOT...Nothing to say
  Commented by  manish kumar, freelancer    | 03 16 2011 06:07:03 +0000
very nice
  Commented by  Rajeev Sharma, executive, Torrent Pharma    | 07 22 2010 05:14:57 +0000
kya baat.. kya baat ...kya baat
  Commented by  Swathi ji ji, HR Manager, orac    | 05 27 2010 07:43:10 +0000
love Never goes but some times lover goes...as we don't have control on Life & Death.
  Commented by  Nikhil, Senior Manager, Insurance    | 04 26 2010 10:00:20 +0000
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It is good to see a poetry here and truly a good one, I used to read a lot of proteries in my college days but lost touch as time went by, thank you and keep posting them good to read , can I print them, no I will not put my name on it , I wish to keep it in hard copy so taht I can read at my residence whenever I feel like
  Commented by  excelan.job, Head/VP/GM-HR, EXCELAN CONSULTANCY PRIVATE LIMITED    | 04 26 2010 09:26:11 +0000
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बहुत प्यार करते थे न मुझे ,
फिर क्यों चले गये... ?

  Commented by  Vivek Singh, Project Manager, L&T    | 04 24 2010 05:43:50 +0000
Rating : +1 
Achchi kavita hai. Aapne akavita se behatar chhand likha hai. Par don me bhasha par control nahi kiya. Hindi, urdu ke mix ke mukable kisi bhi ek bhasha shuddhta zyada achhi lagti hai kavita me.
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