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By : manju dagar, News Anchor/TV Presenter, Time Today
Industry : Radio, TV & Films Functional Area : Valuation
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yahi life hai.

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चक्रवियु
जीवन  के  चक्रवियु  मै ,
पीसता है जीवन ,
कुछ ऐसे ही   ......
जैसे पिसती हु मै  ,
अपनी ही रचना के भीतर ,
कभी खुद ही करती हु आवाज बुलंद ,
कभी रोक लेती हु खुद को ,
बेबाक गवाही देने से ,
जीवन  के  चक्रवियु  मै ,
पीसता है जीवन !
जैसे पिसती हु मै !
 Top Comment : Rohini Kaushal   | 03 20 2009 11:44:13 +0000
Hi Munju, First of all congratulations for your art.......Poetry writing This one is an amazing poetry. Its true life is like a Chkkraviu......where we have to think a lot about our every small small step. And as u said पिसती हु मै , अपनी ही रचना के भीतर , कभी खुद ही करती हु आवाज बुलंद , कभी रोक लेती हु खुद को , बेबाक गवाही देने से , जीवन के चक्रवियु मै , It is correct sometimes we have to compromise on our true inner voice. That’s life. Regards, Rohini.
 
24 comments on "चक्रवियु ......my vision about life"
  Commented by  sujit, PGP Student, Batch of 2010, IIM Kozhikode    | 06 12 2009 09:43:25 +0000
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kya hindi hai chakravyuh bhi likhna nahi aat logon ko.. aur kehte hain wah wah!!! Hindi ki jai ho..
  Commented by  Sovan Maiti, Product Development Manager, Care Biomedicals    | 04 01 2009 06:23:00 +0000
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nice poetry!
  Commented by  Sovan Maiti, Product Development Manager, Care Biomedicals    | 03 24 2009 07:41:38 +0000
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Great poetry, way to go!
  Commented by  suman bhatia, Research Scientist, pgimer    | 03 23 2009 15:06:05 +0000
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hey mann ..........i hv always been a fan of ur poetry..........n this is again superb poetry by my frn.............keep it up dear.......though ur poetry is uncomparable.......bt still i want u to be recognized as gr8 Mirza Ghalib.......cheers......:)..luv u MANN.
  Commented by  SACHIN SAXENA, Financial Analyst, IKANOS COMMUNICAIOTNS    | 03 23 2009 13:49:40 +0000
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"CHALNA HI ZINDAGI HAI CHALTI HI JAA RAHI HAI" vaise to ye ek movie song hai...but is true. Life is a blessing which we get (the lucky people)...There are happiness and sorrows around us. And we are the people who has to decide what we want to choose, but there is a twist that when you choose happiness the sorrows will be a additional as a prize with that. After all good things sadness comes and after all sadness happiness comes. 

So, I have chosen a very simple way to live my life..."and that is "BE POSITIVE" at any cost...we all know that when bad times starts you find yourself all alone. But trust me sit calmly, and close your eyes and try to see your inside, you will find someone who was with you when you were happy and still he or she is there with you when you are in trouble. You are not alone. The person inside you is your power. Make that inside person your friend who will never leave you alone. Whether you are happy or not..........
  Commented by  Yogendra Rana, Network Admin/System Admin, RIS    | 03 23 2009 07:47:08 +0000
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bus yahi kahunga Manju Ji ki apni is buland or vary nice poetry ko share karte rehna kyuki 
ye art sabhi ke paas nahi hoti..........
I like much n read ur all poems thanks  from my heart to you manju..
  Commented by  Arti Arora, Branch Manager/Regional Manager, NII    | 03 22 2009 19:47:24 +0000
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thats a wonderfulllllllllll poem............. Manju. thanks for sharing
  Commented by  Bharat Sadani, Managment Assessment & Audits India    | 03 22 2009 16:02:38 +0000
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It is reality of life,Very goo, if I flowchar the thought It..
Intrspection> Perception > Senssion > Agitation > INTRAPUNITIVE
  Commented by  Bharat Sadani, Managment Assessment & Audits India    | 03 22 2009 16:02:38 +0000
It is reality of life,Very goo, if I flowchar the thought It..
Intrspection> Perception > SenEssion > Agitation > INTRAPUNITIVE
  Commented by  AMOD KUMAR YADAV, Manager - Projects Sales & Marketing, RDK INTERNATIONAL LIGHTING LLC    | 03 22 2009 09:32:39 +0000
Excellent...nice one. Keep it up.
  Commented by  Sumeet Sethi, Regional Manager VRL, VRL    | 03 21 2009 12:38:37 +0000
great thoughts .
  Commented by  kamekish, Information Systems(MIS)-Manager, Innovative Institute of Unlearning    | 03 21 2009 08:35:11 +0000
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Dear Manju, Nice expression... But don't feel so trapped especially in this century. We have to live a life of choice.

Life is another name of choice... earn .. learn ... enjoy .. and share.

Relearn.. innovate... create.... and offcourse unlearn...

Try to express in English.. if possible.

kamekish
  Commented by  sudhir kumar sinha, Founder & CEO, Inovogen    | 03 21 2009 08:17:49 +0000
lovely thought !
  Commented by  Vikas G. Chaudhari, Sr. Design Engineer Jacobs Engineering    | 03 21 2009 07:47:33 +0000
awesome !!
  Commented by  Vivek Singh, Construction Manager L&T    | 03 21 2009 03:18:36 +0000
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Aap bahut hee rangeen personality lagtee hai. At least mujhe ye dard bhi bahut rangeen laga. Pata nahee ye aapke vyaktitva ki chhaap hai ya aapke baare me meri soch ka asar. 
kya hindi typing software jo aap istemaal kar rahi hain usme kuchh limitations hai. Vartani me kabhee kabhee fark aa jaata hai.
  Commented by  DEEPAK AWASTHI, Underwriter HSBC BANK LTD.    | 03 20 2009 15:16:20 +0000
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Hi Manju
            Its wonderfull,,,,,excellent,,,,wonderfull etc,,,,,
            U always jot it down the excellent Poem,,,
            Khusiyaan aur Gam Kahti hai, Phir bhi yeah chup rahti hai
            Ab tak kisi nai na Jana ,,Zindagi kya kahti hai   ( Film : Mann)
            Its very true about life...
            In each of your Poem ,,there is something,,,
            Its one also a nice one :-) 
            
  Commented by  Nitin M Aras, Head/VP/GM-Tech. Support, Wintech Taparia Limited    | 03 20 2009 13:24:58 +0000
Good, creative.

Hame bhi Kavita likhni aur sikhni padegi.

So I can reply in better way.
  Commented by  Rohini Kaushal, HR Executive, Etech, Inc pvt ltd    | 03 20 2009 11:44:13 +0000
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Hi Munju,

First of all congratulations for your art.......Poetry writing

This one is an amazing poetry. Its true life is like a Chkkraviu......where we have to think a lot about our every small small step. And as u said 
पिसती हु मै  , 
अपनी ही रचना के भीतर , 
कभी खुद ही करती हु आवाज बुलंद ,
कभी रोक लेती हु खुद को ,
बेबाक गवाही देने से ,
जीवन  के  चक्रवियु  मै ,
It is correct sometimes we have to compromise on our true inner voice. That’s life.

Regards,
Rohini. 
  Commented by  vicky vikram shah, Retail Store Manager, SNG Fashion Pvt. Ltd.    | 03 20 2009 11:11:22 +0000
amazin bt painful,,,,,,,
  Commented by  Imanpreet $ingh, Student, Kathuria Group of Information Tech.    | 03 20 2009 10:58:35 +0000
Suuuuuuuppppppeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrbbbbbbbbbbbb...............
  Commented by  santosh kadam, Manager (Advt)    | 03 20 2009 10:38:57 +0000
very good

majuji hame ek bat batade e naya our aache topic aap kahase nikalte ho.
  Commented by  Rajesh Thakkar, BDM, INfo    | 03 20 2009 10:38:54 +0000
Really very nice, keep it up!!

  Commented by  JAPI, HR Manager, ACME Consultants    | 03 20 2009 10:32:46 +0000
amazing..............
  Commented by  Abhishek Tiwari, Network Admin/System Admin, STPL INc.    | 03 20 2009 10:26:56 +0000
gud1
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