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By : manju dagar, News Anchor/TV Presenter, Time Today
Industry : Radio, TV & Films Functional Area : Performance
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कितनी अकेली हु मै ,
सबसे बेगानी हु मै ,
चाहा है तुम ने जिसको ,
वो एक पहेली हु मै !
कितनी अकेली .........
सबसे अनजानी हु मै !
चाहा है ...........
.
कितनी दीवानी हु मै ,
सबसे बेगानी .हु मै ,
रातो की रानी हु मै ,
चंदा से आई हु मै    ,
चाहा है ..............
हां  वो कहानी हु मै !

परियो की रानी हु मै,
आखो से जिसको देखा ,
हां  वो हया हु मै !
कितनी अकेली ..........
चाहा है तुम ने जिसको ,
हां वो अदा हु मै !
सपनो मै देखा जिसको , 
अरमा वही हु मै ,
चाहा है तुमको जिसने ,
हां वो हकीकत हु मै !
कितनी अकेली हु मै ,
सबसे बेगानी हु मै ,
लिखा है जिसको खुदा ने,
है वो कहानी हु मै !
कितनी अकेली हु मै!
सबसे बेगानी हु मै  !

 Top Comment : AMOD KUMAR YADAV   | 03 15 2009 05:26:35 +0000
Padhne ke bad sirf aur sirf wah wah nikalta hai..... nice one manju ji .. keep it up.. bas ek iltaza hai aapse, Khud ko akela na samjhe...hum bhi karte hai aapki kawitao ko sajda...hame bhi aap apna hi samje..
 
16 comments on "(मै) only i am"
  Commented by  vishab veer singh rana, Relationship Manager Corporate Sales, policybazaar.com    | 06 10 2009 19:00:25 +0000
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Manju ji i m not poet like u but really ur creations are inspiring me. and ur every post is really beautiful and heart touching.........keep ur great work moving head

Vishab 
waiting for ur next post 
  Commented by  sanjeev duggal, DGM-Marketing, Steel Authority of India    | 03 19 2009 17:46:17 +0000
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Bujh jaye gar shama to jal bhi sakti hai,
Kashti har toofan se nikal sakti hai,
Mayoos na ho iraade na badal,
Zindagi kisi waqt bhi badal sakti hai.
Try seeing the world differently ,you will find yourself in everyone and everyone in you .Phir ye akelapan kahaan bhag jayega aapko bhi pata nahin chalega.
cheers
  Commented by  Goutam Roy Choudhury, BD Manager Dasmesh Export    | 03 18 2009 14:51:41 +0000
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A beautiful emotional poem. You reminds me of a great poet in West Bengal..
Thanks. & Regards.
  Commented by  Arti Arora, Branch Manager/Regional Manager, NII    | 03 17 2009 18:21:34 +0000
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wow !!! really great one
  Commented by  Uday Shankar Mishra, Dy. Manager(C&S)    | 03 17 2009 08:21:19 +0000
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The poem is really very good. But, no loneliness, please.   
  Commented by  dinesh chandra misra, Journalist, sandya-halchal    | 03 16 2009 17:26:00 +0000
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extremely nice poem ,day by day after reading your poem , i'm becoming eager to talk to u directly and tell you some more lines like you are writing these days . anyways , thanks for these lines.
  Commented by  sanjay kr srivastva, Coresspondent-ddnews/air ,editor-social vision    | 03 16 2009 15:51:41 +0000
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सपनो मै देखा जिसको ,  
अरमा वही हु मै ,
चाहा है तुमको जिसने ,
हां वो हकीकत हु मै !
kya ye haqiqat hai 
to thik nahi hai 
vaise acchi kavita hai
  Commented by  SACHIN SAXENA, Financial Analyst, IKANOS COMMUNICAIOTNS    | 03 16 2009 06:53:29 +0000
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Ek dard sa in sooni padi aakhon mein nazar aata hai
Kyon aaj mujhe bhara hua bazaar bhee, khaale nazar aata hai
Dard ko palko ke kinaron mein chupa kar kya chale,
Aaj sab kuch dhoondhla sa nazar kyon aata hai…
Kyon aaj mujhe bhara bazaar bhee, khaalee nazar aata hai…


u r a beautiful writer.
  Commented by  Vikas G. Chaudhari, Sr. Design Engineer Jacobs Engineering    | 03 16 2009 05:04:48 +0000
Rating : +1 
A ajanabi tu bhi kabhi awaaj de kahin se !!
Mein yahan andheron bhataka raha hoon !!
Tu kahin Tukado mein ji rahin he kahin..........!!

Superb!! Jadoo !! 
  Commented by  aditya ghare, Multimedia Designer & Developer, Final Edit    | 03 16 2009 02:41:38 +0000
Rating : +1 
with so many people responding to your poem, I'm sure you're not feeling alone anymore.
  Commented by  puja priya, fresher    | 03 16 2009 02:18:29 +0000
Rating : +1 
its nice but it is full of sorrow and sadness 
  Commented by  varsha ., technical manager(QMS), frac    | 03 15 2009 13:48:37 +0000
Rating : +1 
nice poetry with emmense feeling of lonlinesss...
thanks for refferal
  Commented by  mbhingnekar, Head/VP/GM-Production/Manufacturing, mahagenco,maharashtra    | 03 15 2009 11:09:03 +0000
Rating : +1 
"very emotional!"
"Jindagi ke safar me gujar jate hai jo makam o fir nahi aate , o fir nahi aate! "
  Commented by  Imanpreet $ingh, Student, Kathuria Group of Information Tech.    | 03 15 2009 07:47:42 +0000
Rating : +1 
|||****gorgeous****|||
  Commented by  HASMUKH GANDHI, TV Producer, Self-employed    | 03 15 2009 07:13:22 +0000
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Bahut achhi...sharuaat or ant bemishal...bas bichme thodi ladkhada gayi aisa lagata hai..."likha hai jisko khudane wo ek kahani hu me" ...just wonderful....I mean it...
  Commented by  AMOD KUMAR YADAV, Manager - Projects Sales & Marketing, RDK INTERNATIONAL LIGHTING LLC    | 03 15 2009 05:26:35 +0000
Rating : +1 
Padhne ke bad sirf aur sirf wah wah nikalta hai..... nice one manju ji .. keep it up.. bas ek iltaza hai aapse, Khud ko akela na samjhe...hum bhi karte hai aapki kawitao ko sajda...hame bhi aap apna hi samje..
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